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Daddy a dark-half-moon, chased women
And the aroma of success
Mama, an ancient mission
Believed in the sanctity of love
Sex with strings
Weaving in, weaving out, they produced
A coarsely grated misery
One iceberg morning
Daddy sprang bye for good
That's when Mama splintered
Into pieces
Repeating Sunday
Through Saturday
Me, the Sister-serving bowl, developed
A peculiar waiting game
Dishing out a firm style of neurosis
Jake, the brother, a chip of wood
Possessing dark looks
And stimulating quantities
Would have none of that
Armed with a fine rib-cage
And blue eyes
He expanded towards
Tendencies
Lacking a conscience
Cheating and dealing
In his mind
Was as honest
As politicians
Why should he accept unpleasant
When enjoying free rides
Presented concrete evidence
He was alive
In a mean time, Mama
Climbed into a holy roly box
Landing on her knees
Night and day
She prayed for
Our salvation
And the aroma of success
Mama, an ancient mission
Believed in the sanctity of love
Sex with strings
Weaving in, weaving out, they produced
A coarsely grated misery
One iceberg morning
Daddy sprang bye for good
That's when Mama splintered
Into pieces
Repeating Sunday
Through Saturday
Me, the Sister-serving bowl, developed
A peculiar waiting game
Dishing out a firm style of neurosis
Jake, the brother, a chip of wood
Possessing dark looks
And stimulating quantities
Would have none of that
Armed with a fine rib-cage
And blue eyes
He expanded towards
Tendencies
Lacking a conscience
Cheating and dealing
In his mind
Was as honest
As politicians
Why should he accept unpleasant
When enjoying free rides
Presented concrete evidence
He was alive
In a mean time, Mama
Climbed into a holy roly box
Landing on her knees
Night and day
She prayed for
Our salvation
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This about a dysfunctional family....not mine! *grin*
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Love it! clear yet leaving enough space for open interpretation. Disfunctionality written all over it and history repeating itself in way as well...
Original way of approaching the topic too.
Well done.
Original way of approaching the topic too.
Well done.